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Peer-review:

Final-Draft:

Self-assessment:

This is a self-assessment for the exploratory essay, while writing this paper there were some ups and downs. Even after finishing the paper, I think there are still areas where I can still improve. Such as the evidence used in the paper should correspond more with other evidence to strengthen the thesis of the paper. Also in each paragraph, I should have used multiple pieces of evidence rather than one and also multiple sources in each paragraph. I also feel like the body paragraphs could have been organized in another way which will create a better flow in the paper. Also, the usage of words used in the exploratory essay was too bland, except for the introduction, and the words were probably hard to understand or were less scholarly. I also should rename the essay as a whole, and also narrow my thesis down to a specific problem than a broader problem. I should also try to put a counterargument to the essay to provide the readers with a different perspective on the thesis paper. The conclusion of the paper was probably not a good wrap of the whole paper. I should come up with another conclusion that will make the reader feel like the paper has ended in an understanding closer rather than a rough/confusing closer.